The Keep: the first chapter

What’s your reaction to the sudden shift in perspective on page 12, where there’s a first-person interjection (“…how I’m supposed to get him in and out of all these memories in a smooth way so nobody notices all the coming and going I don’t know”) into the third person narrative about Danny and Howie? How about when it becomes clear that this is a story about a story on page 18?

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